- Good ideas, confident pitch, lots of information, blog colours very vibrant and original.
- Exellent and unique and creative concept.
- Storyline of the music video sounds appealing.
- Relevant research into similar videos, ideas and experimenting different camera use and similar bands.
- Lots of information about influences.
- Good details about copyright permission.
Suggestions for improvement:
- include planing and film exercises (e.g split screen).
- Add treatment for secure target audience.
- Cut down ideas as it would be difficult to use all of them in the video.
- Add sketches of storyboard, digipack and magazine adverts.
- More research into the promotion of the video.
We also took ideas from other people's blog which were very well presented:
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